Comments

Sarah ( F C D ) at 2008-05-22

I enjoyed this wonderful piece you penned here, perfectly written. I hope one day you define your destiny. Awesome write!

[5.5]

Sarah

Kittens Poems ( P C ) at 2008-05-22

Very sweet poem

lustiousSeduction xo ( F P C ) at 2008-05-23

Omg! thats such a beautiful poem! i love it, love every word! you hav amazing talent hun. i can relate 2 this one! keep up the amazing work 5/5
Love Love xo

Perfect Imperfection ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-23

Kayla, dear, this poem is very sweet...Jake's going to florida soon..won't really see him until July....so it's relatable. but know, if things change, things change. you can't stop them, so embrace them and hope that htey change for the better. *hugs*

Twisted Illusion ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-23

*hugs* You know I'm here. Brillaint write angel. You explained your feelings well. I really hope things work out and I'm glad you'll see him again. A lovely write huni. 5/5

xDanikax
Take Care
xxoxoxx

Hieu V Ngueyn ( F C D ) at 2008-05-23

AW... this is a very true poem, you're not alone, i'm currently feeling the same thing!

pleae keep up the good work!

5/5

NEIL MUNRO ( C ) at 2008-05-23

Excellent poem, shows your true feelings perfectly, i know whats it's like to be away from the one you care about believe me. Keep writting 5/5

MJ at 2008-05-23

Your poem is beautiful. And I can relate a lot. Keep up the good work!

Amanda at 2008-05-23

Very Beautiful Poem

Kenny Choo at 2008-05-24

Beautiful a lot of thought

ekeller14 at 2008-05-24

Nice poem i love it its deep

Taylor xP ( F ) at 2008-05-24

That was so super good!! Wow you've got skillz...

FallingPieces at 2008-05-24

What a nice poem !! i really liked it :D
keep it up 5 out of 5

xxHeart Broken Loserxx ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-24

Awww so ah-dorable i deff. understand how you feel for me school ends in 17 days and i cant live wihtout this boy

XOOOXOOO

k<3yla

ile at 2008-05-24

I can relate to what you mean. my school year is ending soon and now that i think about it i wont get to see my crush either.

i love this poem...keep it up!

Becca ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-24

I loved this poem. It was powerful, and I can completely relate but in a differnt way. I'm stuck in love with an ex. But this was beautifully written and you are an amazing writer! 5/5

CatastrophicTragedyXx at 2008-05-24

Awwwwww this is beautiful..
this poems just says EXACTLY how i feel right now..amazzzzing job puttin this feeling into words ^_^
its simply amazzzing <3

keep up the good work! 10/5 lol xD..haha 5/5

Linzi at 2008-05-24

You Should So Tell Him How You Feel
Its A Real Nice Poem =]*

♥shyann♥ ( F P C ) at 2008-05-26

Beautiful poem<3
i love the way you worded this

"I know tomorrow will hurt,
But the tears will fade away.
Life is too short for regrets,
There will be a brighter day."

and this part was flawless:

"Looking back on everything,
I still remember his smile.
I wish things didn't end so soon,
And turn back time for awhile"

Overall its a wonderful poem you did a great job!! 5/5