sara b
at 2004-11-17
sweet very sweet i hope it does last if you care for him that much
melanie
at 2004-11-17
hi, wow i love ur poem. it made me almost cry because it reminds me about how i feel about my boyfriend.
:-) its such a great poem. i hope u write more. cant wait to see em ~mel
ALEXANDRA
at 2004-11-17
WOW I REALLY LOVE YOUR POEM IT ALL WENT THROUGH WITH THE FLOW. CAN YOU CHECK OUT MY POEM ''PLEASE FORGIVE ME'' ILL SHOW YOU HOW I FEEL
pauline
at 2004-11-17
great job keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KB2389 ( F P C D )
at 2004-11-17
Cute poem! I really like the way you've written it. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more! If you get a chance check out some of mine.
-Kate
monique
at 2004-11-17
i love your poem thats exactly what i feel for my man too.
Sabrina
at 2004-11-17
Wussup BabyGirl? Well... i really liked the poem u wrote. That describes so many relationships so perfectly. Im glad I found this poem and I hope when u read this, u understand how much i appreciate u writing this poem and describing my feelings for the most wonderful guy I've ever met.
faded
at 2004-11-17
hey this poem is great... its so sweet... and it shows how much you love your baby... keep up the good work
janelle
at 2004-11-18
That poem is hard. I liked it.
janelle
at 2004-11-18
That poem is hard. I liked it.
Laura
at 2004-11-18
i love this poem
brokensoul67
at 2004-11-18
that poem is super cute girl!!!! keep em' comin'
lindsay
at 2004-11-18
this is exactly how i feel i love it
CrAzEe In LoVe 04
at 2004-11-18
great poem....i loved it....keep it up!!!! 5 all the way!!!!
sexzyaznbabe ( F C )
at 2004-11-18
so lovely =) i really like ur poem =) i gave this one a 5 =)... hope u pass by mine sometimes... i wrote poems for my friend who passed away recently... much love... letishia
Samantha ( F )
at 2004-11-19
wow this poem is so0o0o0o about my b.f :-D gr8 job! and keep up the good work! LOVE IT!
<33Sammy
katie
at 2004-11-19
this poem is very gr8!!!!!! this poem is so much like my b.f. ! gr8 job and keep up the good work :)
p.s. read some of mine and tell me wut u think :)
<3 katie
Kari Hensley
at 2004-11-19
-Wow...I really enjoyed reading this...It's one of my favorites! It really made me feel like you were in love for real-
alecia
at 2004-11-19
This poem tells the story of me and this one guy! Good job and keep up the good writing!!!!!
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