Emily
at 2005-03-20
great poem!!! its so beautiful. thats so sad. great job. keep up the great work. it was so beautiful and deserves a 5/5
*emily*
Brooke ( F C D )
at 2005-03-21
Very sad. I don't think I have ever read any of ur stuff before glad I ran across ur poems. Beautiful! Take Care!
*~*Soldier Lover*~* ( F P C D )
at 2005-03-21
Wow..... very powerful.... it actually brought tears to my eyes.... awesome poem.... -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*
scaredOFtheDARK
at 2005-03-23
every verse----------EXCELLENT, what can i say, no bad bits, keep up the good work, love annmarie
alexis!
at 2005-03-24
thats beautiful, and so emotional. you're very talented!! keep up the great work.
-alexis!
XღÜñ§€€ñ¯†€ª®§ ( F C D )
at 2005-03-25
omg...that made me want to cry! You did a great job It was so touching. Excellent poem
James
at 2005-04-07
great poem.. i felt the loss in it. tell your friend sorry for his loss
lisa x) ( F P C D )
at 2005-05-18
omg...such...omg.....flipping speechless....such a nice/great/masterpeice......
i really loved this poem....WOW
Abby
at 2005-06-22
this was really good. it was real but not cliche if you know what i mean. i really liked it. i would really appreciate you reading some of my poems. my newest is all over again, its the realest things ive ever written. id appreciate the comment. thanks <3
ashley
at 2005-07-09
thats awesome i love it! i had to wipe away a tear! no lie! great poem! =.(
Nema ( F P C D )
at 2005-07-18
aww!! what a lovely poem
it vroke my heart..really poor that guy
but hey keep ur work i also liked the rhyme!!
take care
Nema
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patria
at 2005-07-26
thats so sweet, great poem
BabsB6 ( P C D )
at 2006-06-09
Wow. got goosebumps and almost got teary-eyed. amazing poem. so full of emotion and pain. 5/5
aurora
at 2007-07-16
This is the greatest poem i have evr read!!!
ben senior
at 2007-07-26
I had to sign up just to comment. this poem is excellent really really good. i couldnt read it all because its so emotional. excellent job keep at it !!!!!!!!!
Amanda ( F C )
at 2007-08-23
Amazing poem i just found out that i have cancer and its been really tough for my man and i just pray for him that i can beat it so he doesnt have to go threw that 5/5
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