Naomi Ann
at 2005-04-11
what a great poem i really like it ALOT!! this poem explains how i feel for some one rite now also. keep it up!
beautifuldisastr
at 2005-04-18
that poem is awesome! it completely describes how i feel about someone right now. ur writing is great keep up the good work :D
Bethanie John
at 2005-04-18
Great poem. I'd say go for it. If it doesn't work there are always other people out there. Keep writing!!!
love is a promise
at 2005-04-18
THIS POEM SOUND JUST LIKE MY FRIEND BRITTNIE AND THE GUY THAT SHE IS MADLY IN LOVE WITH! GREAT JOB KEEP IT UP
Sasha ( C )
at 2007-04-28
That pretty much sums up what my opinion on life is its a very nice poem and good luck with the guy hope things work out
Amber
at 2007-06-04
I Loved this poem! It was really fitting for me! I can relate!
Janae ( D )
at 2007-09-26
Oh wow, i love this. that is exactly how i feel...good job! you put tears in my eyes!
rona
at 2007-11-08
I love your poems... every words you've said its true. because this is the way i felt.
dAnCe4aDrEaM ( F C )
at 2008-03-23
Wow your poems truly catch the heart! i love them!
i can relate to SOO many of them!
jyzka ( F )
at 2008-07-13
Yeah!!
it's really really hard to tell someone that you do like him... it takes a lot of courage.. that's why some of us just tend to put it in words, write a poem so that, somehow they'll be able to express what is in their heart..
anyway, for your poem, nicely done...
flows smoothly keep it up!
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