Comments

lil g ( C ) at 2005-05-18

great job

Tammi ( F P C D ) at 2005-05-18

I love it and can relate to it keep up the good work

gemma ( P C ) at 2005-05-18

really good writing, great flow! take care xxxxxx

Kandy Starkey ( F C ) at 2005-05-23

I understand how you feel. Easy to relate with. 5!

anacristina at 2005-05-23

I really love ur poem I can really realate to your poems i went through it just last week and its so true lol. keep the good work up check my poems out!

macylynne at 2005-05-23

Gemma,

dont worry girl i kno excatly how you feel and i am sure everyother girl out there does too!Kepp your head up and it will be okay

~macyLynne

Nz0 ( F C D ) at 2007-07-17

Yeh love can make u do all kinds of things... but if its a poem like this, then i feel its worth it =D

trippetta ( P C ) at 2009-02-25

I really liked the flow, good stanza's, but the title could be better, although I do love that song time after time by Cyndi Lauper. It just distracted from the beauty in the rest of the verse.

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