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sarah at 2005-08-26

I loved your poem so much..

lilia ( F P C ) at 2005-08-27

Aww..very cute 5/5 check out poems too..thankss

X3_Miss_Understood_X3 ( F C D ) at 2005-08-27

Aww very good, but in the ending part you put fight and fight together maybe you could rhyme it with something else? but still it was a fantastic poem, it had a very nice flow and was really good, great job, 5/5

Travis Smith ( F P C D ) at 2005-08-27

Very well written, flowed great and was a read!! it was creative, i mean i can see why its 22 votes and 5.0 great job! 5/5

SpEeChLeSs ( F ) at 2005-08-27

Excellent job! I loved it, I cant relate to that in everyway. That was really good.I would love if ya could check out my poems sometime. Keep it up!

kissmesoftly at 2005-08-27

This poem was phenominal, and exciting. you know, ur work is fantastic, im going to base sum of my work on yours.

Robert F ( F P C D ) at 2005-08-28

Thats really good.

Ivona at 2005-08-28

That is real good, its like it comes from the heart not many guys can write poems so its great i love it!! i got a similour one to urs it would be great if u check out mine sometime!!!!!!!
ceep it up mwah....

KnOwN b4 As ~Ω♪♥◄MiChA■at 2005-08-28

Thumbs up!!!
u reallyy are talented 5/5 so defiinetly keep up the gr8 work u started and never stop writing
umm i'll appreciate it a lot if u comment and rate a poem of mine called"never!" that would reallyy mean a lot 4 me
take care
peace and much love
micha

ViCtOrIa at 2005-08-28

Very good poem max..keep it up..ur a great writer

CRYSTAL ( F C D ) at 2005-08-28

I m happy 4 u!!
remember: PoEtRy Is ThE LaNgUaGe Of ThE hEaRt

wendy ( C ) at 2005-08-28

So so sweet i like the poem ...... keep smiling

Michelle Foxon at 2005-08-28

She must be worth it that was beautiful i wish my fellow would do the same I hope she appreciates the words that you have poured out it may seem soppy but the way to my heart is through words I hopes she thinks so too

brit ( D ) at 2005-08-30

Just wanted to say that i really enjoyed your poem and to keep up the good work :)

*~*Gina*~* ( C ) at 2005-08-30

Great Poem It was really good!
~Smile Always~
Gina

Hallie at 2005-08-30

OMG MAX U ROC
xoxox
Hallie

Danielle at 2005-08-31

Great!!!!!!!!

Marissa at 2005-08-31

I like your poem a lot ...
its so cute :D you are a great writer :) much love Marissa

amber ( F P C D ) at 2005-08-31

It is really good

Tyler at 2005-08-31

That was awsome!!!!! heck yes. that is a sweet poem. your really talented.
thanks


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