sarah ( F P C )
at 2005-11-11
Amazing writen poem about love and death such pain in this romance but the love will always show in her tear stained face i do love this piece
ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ ( F P C D )
at 2005-11-13
I understand what u mean and i love the way that u write..i love how u put your emotions first and everything else 2nd...keep up the great job...i can relate to u alot 5/5
~*Who Cares?*~ ( F P C D )
at 2005-11-13
Im sry if this is tru....gr8 poem...5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~
♥Missy♥ ( F P C D )
at 2005-11-13
The Rhyming in this poem is excellent, and I love the simile "Like a Thin Piece of Lace." Great Job, 5/5
Morgan
at 2005-11-13
Zi loved it. Def a 5/5!! The title grabbed my attention so I had to read it! It just got better the more I read.
Great flow. It's flawless, perfect!
aaron-16/m/cali ( F P C D )
at 2005-11-14
That was a magnificent poem. so strong and bold. i felt it throught to the bones. the rhythm was perfect. it was eerie in a sense. i liked it.
Amanda Linzi (Millie) ( F P C D )
at 2005-11-16
Oh it was great to read right to the end and i found it an interesting piece of work with such talent behind it! A bit sad though....
kim
at 2005-11-18
That was amazing i realy enjoyed reading it and i think im going to have a look at the rest of your poems as that one was so good and touching 5/5
♥aLYSSA♥
at 2005-11-18
Wow... i really love this. i think that you are every talented. keep it up!
myshiningstar14 ( F P C )
at 2005-11-18
"NO one knew she was so frail, like a thin piece of lace!" i looove that line. And i also love..."her tears said it all, eh was her depression, when he pretended to fall." aww good job! keep up the talent! yippeee! xox LISSA
broken&torturedsoul
at 2005-11-18
I like it I feel the engery and the mood it's awesome.
Zoe Lee
at 2005-11-19
WOW, awesome poem, you're a really great write...luvd it...keep it up =)
Amber
at 2005-11-30
This is a very good poem although it is also very sad! I have a few friends who have wanted to commit suicide over a guy and it's the hardest thing to talk someone out of, but people need to know that it is not worth it! I do like this poem although I hope that it didn't really happen to someone you know.
Until the end.(¯`v´¯) ( F C D )
at 2005-12-06
I love the way you rhymed in this poem.
It shows how two emotions can mix into one.
5/5
Sarah Drew ( F P C D )
at 2005-12-20
Beautifully sad poem. There was so much emotion in this.
Kurmit-Chaya ( P C D )
at 2006-04-10
I loved this poem your a great writer keep it up 5/5
Sole ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-18
Again. I'm runnign out of things to say. Great work, it flowed really well and the rhyming was almost perfection. Keep it up!
Peace. [Sole]
Kali Marie ForEverAndAlways ( F C )
at 2008-06-12
Wow that was amazing. i have only felt that way onnce. but i never went that far. i only carved pain hurt and die into my arm. but i held the knife to my kneck but suddenly relized that everything would be okay. great poem. for real.
xOInLoveWithYouxO ( F P C )
at 2008-12-18
Wow.
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