william mae ( F P C )
at 2005-12-02
You write a love poem so good, so smooth, and with heart. I loved it stormy, thanks for the comments on mine this morning also. have a good one,
Bill Turner ( F P C D )
at 2005-12-02
Absolutely beautiful. Great write!
HOLLY ARMER ( F P C D )
at 2005-12-02
Beautiful piece! So full of love and devotion, very nicely done! Take care~Holly
Ann *Stareyes* ( F P C D )
at 2005-12-03
Terry,
What can I say....a beautiful and heartfelt piece...words from the heart that means so much....lovely piece that truly touches the heart....
Love Ann
Gary Jurechka ( F P C D )
at 2005-12-05
I don't know how I missed this one before.This is really beautiful, so honest and emotional, good rhyme scheme and flow.I hope this works out for you-it sounds like being in love yet a little unsure or something.But I love your sentiments and the way you bring the mood and emotion across to the reader.Really, such a very touching piece....
Kristine Søndenå ( C )
at 2005-12-08
Very nice one ;)
Gessu
at 2005-12-08
This is so beautyful.. You did a great job with it!!!
Fadedstar ( F C )
at 2006-03-24
Omg..
Stop witht hesee outragesly awesome poems.
im jealous lol
there all soooo good.
and i can relate to this onee.
goood work
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2006-05-04
"I pray that the hurt
We sometimes feel inside
Will one day come to an end
Along with tears we've cried
I hope to always have this feeling
That you bring to me
Take another look into my heart...
I love you...honestly."
You certainly know how to write a love poem...I must confess a small tear in my eye when I finished this beautiful write...being male I'm sure it's just a cold. lol. Very well done. A five because there is no six. 5/5 Billy Rob
^♥^HurT^♥^ ( F C D )
at 2007-01-16
At last i registered and i can tell u how much i love this poem! It's SOO LOVELY! :)
Harry Bryant ( F P C )
at 2009-10-27
Stormy,
how in love you must have felt when you penned this poem, and I trust that you feel the same today, I have always admired your work, and your mind, let alone the rest of you, it has been such a long time since I have written anything, and it is so nice to see Holly and Ann"starryeyes"commenting they are quality people love ya Harry
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