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cherelle at 2006-01-18

I guess when u hurt someone else heart u get what u deserve but anyways your poem was great i love the way u wrote it. somehow i knew what u went through and it effected me just like i did u. well keep writing your poetry maybe one day u could pubish a book.

cherelle at 2006-01-18

Sorry iknow ur hurting in way only one person can heal and its her. but u keep on tryin and maybe one day she will relieve what she had left

Diana at 2006-01-18

I understand that you love her, but everything in this world happens for a reason. You may not think of it like that right now but its true, and if she really is the one for she'll come back, and if she isn't then you are gonna find the girl of your dreams a girl like no other okay. So keep your head up high and good luck!! :)

¤|ƒlοяεηζîά|¤ ( F C D ) at 2006-01-18

Sorry to hear that this is happening to you. But broken hearts will heal, and one day you'll be whole again. So please dont give up.

hugs, florence

disazngurllove ( F C ) at 2006-01-18

Whoa great poem as always

bek at 2006-01-18

How can one person feel so many emotions in 1 mintue but guess what i feel more

i like ur poem i really do

Nicole at 2006-01-18

Babe... this is an awesome poem... but y so many sad poems still? i see u everyday punk.. i love u

MidNight-Killer ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-19

Wow that is beautiful like wow 5/5 and yea i know what you mean, awesome poem

Jenn ( F ) at 2006-01-20

I like this poem!! its really cute and i like that only a minute has passed...i know what ur saying

Amber at 2006-01-30

Wow, that is so true, lol well all of them are, but yeah i love this one cause it goes really well with me and my friend, but yeah u need to get on more

Switchblade ( F P C D ) at 2006-02-23

That was a very inspirational piece...I like it very much...that had real meaning to that.....Just Wow...

He...ChEaTeD ( F P C ) at 2006-03-14

..i no we dont talk much anymore but this is my new account ;)
my other one got suspended :(

Jade ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-11

Hey thats a great poem, it has so much power to it, and I know what its like to look at the clock and feel like hours have passed by but its only been a minute. The flow was so nice, and theres so much emotion (Y) good job!

Cassidy Lopes at 2006-06-10

Hey cassanova, its cassidy... this poem is sooooo good!!! ur n excellent writer!!!!!

Jess ( P C ) at 2006-06-14

I love this poem, and no exactly what u mean, how these thoughts and feelings can spin round your head so quickly, that not one minute is left alone without you thinking of her :(. im sure it will get better though xxx

Andrea at 2006-10-14

This is aweosome. i've felt this way so many times!

naive at 2006-10-16

Its really good . i kno where youre cuming with that well done xxx

♥ dont forget to remember me ( F P C ) at 2006-10-16

Thats such a deep poem n i no how you feel xxx

BabblingxoBrooke ( F P C ) at 2007-08-15

This is such a good poem! I loved it, i actually read it a couple times=]p

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