HOLLY ARMER ( F P C D )
at 2006-01-23
Beautiful! The flow is flawless and your words emit so much emotion.
Truly an awesome read! Take care~Holly
Bill Turner ( F P C D )
at 2006-01-23
Funny how, in the most loving of relationships the mind whips up self doubt. You have captured that spirit so well with this wonderful poem.
Bradley Peter ( F P C )
at 2006-01-24
Bloody brillaint love! its been a while since i've read one of your poems. iv got you on my favorites list yet i don't think i saw your poems coming up...which i kind of weird, lol. oh well, never mind. i'm getting off track. i felt this poem was great. i loved every stanza, which sadly means i couldn't pick a favorite one...sorry. the words flowed and the writing was extremly creative. i love the insecurity in it-the emotion. its a great story, and its brelliantly told. I can't wait for you next masterpiece
Brad
P.S. you may not remember me...but we have conversed poems before.
♥Angela♥ ( F P C D )
at 2006-01-25
I think many of us can relate to this write....... lots of emotion in your words, beautifully written.
JJ ( F C D )
at 2006-01-26
"My greatest fear will always be
that someday.......you will stop loving me"
^I'm sure so many of us can relate...I know I can... I guess in the end we find out, still I wish sometimes it were the other way around
terrific write! keep up the good work!
Amanda
at 2006-01-29
AWWWWWWW 10/10
bharti ( F P C D )
at 2006-01-30
Awesome!!!!!! lovely!!!
i think this fear resides in hearts of all of us.
great write dear
Bharti
Emma ( C )
at 2006-01-30
Wow this poem is beautiful
I can really relate
Hope everything is ok ,,,
heeheehee
xxxx
Emma ( C )
at 2006-01-30
Wow this poem is beautiful
I can really relate
Hope everything is ok ,,,
heeheehee
xxxx
Cuddles ( F P C D )
at 2006-01-30
So excellently written, Luanne! This is so wonderful. I can identify with your greatest fear. It's my greatest fear for me, too. I couldn't have written this better.
Johnnel
at 2006-01-30
That was great!!!!!111
Kat
at 2006-01-30
That was amazing i love it!!!
Kat
Moranda
at 2006-01-30
This is an awesome poem and it really hits hard. A lot of us can relate to these feelings. keep up tha good work.
~*Rican Chemistry*~ ( F P C D )
at 2006-01-30
Hey Luanne, this was an awesome piece...very deep. I liked it a lot...Keep writting please, I love to read your stuff!!!
::MELI::
Erika
at 2006-01-30
I think that your poem was good
Danielle
at 2006-01-30
I loved this poem. Everyone in love always has this feeling and you put it into words really good!
neens ( F P C )
at 2006-02-01
Luanne You have such an awesome talent. I love reading your poems. It has been a while. but I will rate and comment on as many as possible.
~neens~
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