robyn ( F C )
at 2006-02-16
This is such a great heart felt poem i loved it great work :)
xoxo robyn
Bill Turner ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-16
I love the flow and attitude in this. Confident, flippant and passionate. Great poem!
♥Angela♥ ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-16
Loving and passionate...... with knowing it will last forever. Beautifully written.
Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela (mom)
master of shadow ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-16
Brillliant poem, flows very well and has a uniqueness about it.
5/5
¡Britt! ( F C D )
at 2006-02-16
Okay, so I'm glad to see you wrote a poem about me after I wrote one about you.
HAHAHA.
I'm only slightly kidding.
but I do love this poem. I can't even describe how perfect it is. I LOVE It!!
Kim ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-16
Darien I love this poem! hahaha it made me laugh at times and it wa sso perfect!!!!! I'm so glad you're back and so glad you had me join :) It's not half so interesting without you!!! Take care and keep writing those amazing poems!!!!
Lisa x) ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-16
Darien!
Wow, this is a superb poem! I loved the whole Idea, and using clebs names and what not was so unique.
The whole poem made me smile, its such a cute love story!
Well done, keep it up, you got a good muse :]x
Simon Hayes ( F C D )
at 2006-02-16
Hey ... don't slag off the notebook... LOL! This is perfect Darien... It makes up for your not writing for a while! I really enjoyed this, the flow is a triumph and the words are just beautiful :)
ღd0яαღ´*`.¸ ( F C )
at 2006-02-16
Ahh darien that was s0 beautiful such a sweet piece. very well written a heartfelt piece keep it up
l0ve always d0ra
Gesselle Valle ( F C D )
at 2006-02-20
:'') me cries happy tears... that poem was so amazing and touching. hey, did you ever finish that song you were writing... you gotta send me the rest! ^_^ hugs my friend and miss ya.
jessica Cardenas
at 2006-02-22
I really like this poem. It made me think alot about me.
Jessica
shobhana kumar ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-22
Very nicely written, great flow and real display of emotions!
good luck and keep writing!
shobhana
Val
at 2006-02-23
A vaery nice different aspect, well done
becca
at 2006-02-23
Thats was great...and well written..im impressed...yours is one of the best ive seen yet! keep it up
alex
at 2006-02-23
Very creative and well written loved it.
Keep writing.
xo
Sarah Ingmire
at 2006-02-23
I love this poem...it's really good and makes alot of sense.
Jess ( F P C )
at 2006-02-23
This is a great poem and if you geet a chance read mine it is called This was meant to be. Keep up the GOOD work!
Jess ( F P C )
at 2006-02-23
This is a great poem and if you geet a chance read mine it is called This was meant to be. Keep up the GOOD work!
advice4thelonely ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-23
Thats cute. and it totally rocks nice job
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