Comments

chavii ( F C D ) at 2006-03-19

Beautiful poem ,the way you have put your feelings in words is amazing ,blessed are those who finds true pure love .

Best wishes,
Chavii.

kumar ( F P C ) at 2006-03-19

Beautiful love poem.....take care and keep writing...

u* got *me* cravin* 4* ur* LOVE ( F C ) at 2006-03-19

Far out that was an amazing read.5/5.lived it so much that i cud feel it in my heart too.lol. its so gud to be in love and feel it ,its an amazing feelind.isnt it?

takecare
all the best.

sonam

Illuminati ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-19

Beautiful poem! Very heart felt I must say.
It flows well but if you would double-check
and modify your rhyme scheme it would have
even a greater flow... just my thoughts :)
Keep on writing!

♥ iNviSibLe 2 u ♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-19

Wow this is beautiful!!!!!! i liked it
well done your flow was really good and the topic very sweet keep writting :d xx ALLY xx

Ali ( F C ) at 2006-03-20

Wow, wow, wow true emotions being laid here! Awesome poetry, I just loved every bit of it!!!
5/5 for sure!!! Keep up the good work!

Truly amazing! thanks for commenting on mine!

Ali

End Of Sky ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-21

Beautiful as always, i really like love poems a lot nowdays and u r one of my fav...love reading ur poems.

great poem

all the best and take care

justalone ( F P C ) at 2006-03-22

Oh. heart-melting words. bound to capture the pure innocence and romanticism of love. truly a masterpiece.

Cuddles ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-23

Simply put, this is one of the best poems I've read this morning. It's both passionate and innocenlty romantic at the same time. Beautiful!!

Robert Gardiner ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-24

Sweet and lovely penn Pure Heart, nicely done!!!

BeBee at 2006-03-24

AMAZING...
all i can say....lol

Joseph at 2006-03-25

Oh my gosh that was a perfect poem.......

Tripp ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-25

The feelings are just gushing from this poem. whoever you wrote this for, i wish the both of you luck. great poem

Tanya at 2006-03-26

Can u send me this poem at tnycmrn18@yahoo.com.au if so thanks

sarah ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-27

Thanks for your comments meant alot,I have read just about all your poems, and all are great keep writing so i can keep reading take care hun sarah x

Italian Stallion ( F P C D ) at 2006-04-07

Absoultly beautiful, I loved it. You have an amazing way of making the words flow. Awesome Job. once again don't use Slang. instead of u use you.
Keep up the good work.

Ann Marie ( F P C D ) at 2006-04-08

Another very nice poem.

I feel your strength...
Your hands crawling..
lost in your world...

Great work!