*completly_in_love*
at 2006-06-29
I love this you worded it so well. well this is a really great poem 5/5 for sure
*completly_in_love*
at 2006-07-03
Awesome poem loved it! it was writen so well. well bye!
*sarah*
IfIhide11 ( C D )
at 2006-07-08
It was a great poem. When I first read it, I knew right away your deserved to win the contest. Congrads, you won 1st.
-ifihide11
Dre4meR ( F C D )
at 2006-07-14
This is great my friend...such a lovely wrtten poem...i truely am touch by the words usages in this writting..
"I wish you were here and not over there,
Yet life is hard as well as unfair,
All I can do is wish and wait,
Until we meet again as that is our fate,"
those were my favorite lines...sometimes i leave it to fate to decide
lauren
at 2006-09-14
Awesome poem
ScreenplayOfDesire ( F C D )
at 2006-09-24
I've been in a long distance relationship before.. it's hard. Anything you need to talk about.. I'm here. Great work!
sweet_rebellion ( C )
at 2006-11-27
I think you have excellent talent! You are on my favorites list! I wish there were more guys out there that felt this way about girls and had love and respect for them! But there are very few. Whoever this girl is that you love so much should feel very lucky to have someone to love her in such a special and beautiful way! I hope to see more of your poems! They are very beautifuland inspiring!
-sweet_rebellion
Jade ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-30
Hey, thanks for your comment! This poem is really well done, it flows so well. there was alot of work put into this! And wow that is one lucky girl! Keep up the awesome work!
PS. I accendentally hit the complain button instead of your name to get to your poems. and dont what they will do... it wasnt a bad comment so i hope they see it as a mistake...sry
Alex
at 2007-04-19
Perfect.
deevya
at 2007-04-22
I agree wid alex...............its perfect
Tori
at 2007-04-23
Aww so sad... :(
great poem
Kayla
at 2007-05-09
It makes me think about my baby!!!I am goin to copy this and give it to him!!
BrokenDreams ( F P C )
at 2007-05-29
I love this poem a lot...i am going threw this right now...i live in michigan and my b/f lives all the way up in washington! Great Job
Patricia
at 2008-09-05
I love this poem! i have been in a long distance relationship before and it was really hard to even think he was miles away! When he got back nothing was the same so i told myself i would never do that again!
ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs ( F C )
at 2009-01-17
Wow this was an amzing poem
your a veryy good writer :)
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