-] ñØ òÑé [- ( F P C )
at 2006-08-29
I think the word "poet" is used too many times but that's being critical I suppose. Overall - I like the vibe I got from this poem and it tells a beautiful story. 5/5
donaldrminikus ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-29
When a poet loves.
Can only say. again a beautiful poem.
Don
ReBecca ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-29
How beautiful. I ususally dont read love poems, but this was referred as a great poem, so I read it and was touched. Great job, easy to read, nice flow.
Laura ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-30
Your penned words are original and simple yet at the same time very profound. This poem almost brought a tear to my eye. You painted a sad yet beautifdul picture of an undying love between 2 souls. I loved it so much I had to read it twice!!! Such a pleasure to read!
Cuddles ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-30
WOW!! I wish to say more, but you'll have to wait until my mind can function again. This is completely stunning.
Sondos ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-30
That was out of this world!
So incredibly written. I have no critiscim ooh it was a sumptuous read !
jessel jane ( P C )
at 2006-09-01
How did you do it?I mean... wow,how in the world it touched me much... really,two thumbs up!!
ღNemOღ ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-02
Awwwww, this is absolutely TERRIFIC~!!!!
I LOVE this poem so much...the idea was very Captivating and the title aswell!
I'm glad you could write poems in a VERY poetic way...this is what poetry looks like..
this poem has so many beautiful meanings...outstanding, beautiful Ryhme, very breathtaking =)
Poets like you ain't easy to find...very great job honey keep it up
Thanks for your Inspiration
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x
victoria ( C )
at 2006-09-02
WOW..that is very deep,wow...i dont have any words to express that.wow...well keep on writing and inspirering.
victoria
InDiA iZzZzZ Ju$$ 2 Go0o0oD 2 B3 ( F P C )
at 2006-09-02
5/5!!! WOW I AM SPEECHLESS!! BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!! UR WORDS ARE SO AMAZING!!! WOW UR SUCH A GIFTED WRITER!!! OH n plz Rate n Comment some of ma poemz as well ;)
-*`d0ra ( F C )
at 2006-09-02
That was s0 beautiful!! great j0b darl. very well written!! l0ved it =] xx
~◊broken soul◊~
at 2006-09-03
OH-EM-GEE!!!
5/5
LOVE IT OH SO VERY MUCH!!!
I totally relate to this poem alot...
Write more okayys...
I really enjoy it loads...
It really touches the heart...
`schmaltzy
Deana ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-05
This is so beautiful and enchanting , the words feel like they belong to a different time period,an era of romance and undying love, you know the kind we all want!
Anna Stephens ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-05
You simply take my breath away!
Simple, stunning, haunting, wonderous--the beauty of it overwhelms me.
WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL!
Blessings,
Anna Stephens
stormy ( F C D )
at 2006-09-08
WOW..
Dear Bert, this just completely blew me away..so very *Outstanding*. This is one of those writes that just settles in the soul and stays there. You are truly remarkable. You bring so much heart to this site. So very well done. Bravo!!
Excellent...then again, that's you.
Peace and Love~
Terry
goran ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-08
Another great poem by you, you are a very talented poet with great feelings and words. i really enjoy your poetry.
♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥© ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-09
It Should Be a Sin To Write This Good, I'm Officialy Jealous lol 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
Marcus ( F C D )
at 2006-09-21
You are an awesome poet...you keep your poems long yet the excellence is consitent throughout the whole poem
RainbowSlider ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-15
Wow, that was really something.
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