misstress ( F C D )
at 2006-09-28
Lovely.
Truly loves inspires us in many ways.
I like the way you said 'Perfect Roses'...
'tis was a good read.
God Bless!
"If Love is like Roses,then what about its thorns?"
ღNemOღ ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-29
OMG!!!!!!! I REALLY need these words in my life!!!!!
beautiful poem lovely!
I love the passions in it..and how you used your words very right!
Omg I just dunno what to say, you're seriously inspiring me everyday!!!!
Thanks for sharing
Best Of Luck
NemO xxxxxxxxxxx
Andrea ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-29
Bert: This is a beautiful piece....The words and descriptive creativity bring it to life....along with a loving romantic heart.....very nice!
Andrea
stormy ( F C D )
at 2006-09-29
Deep, beautiful words from a perfect heart. Very well done. I love your work Bert...just so thoughtful, such loving words. You are an awesome soul.
Much love to you my friend,
Terry
© The Lightning Count ® ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-29
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that's hot. I liked it. Very very well done. Solid all the way around, from the context, diction that you choice, which by the way makes it very very fitting. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I have never seen you write anything like this, but I do hope that in the future you perhaps choose to do something similar again. Loved every part of it. Take care Bro. Have a great day.
Kindest Regards,
-The Lightning Count
-*`d0ra ( F C )
at 2006-09-29
HEy darl a very heartelt poem. great use of words in this. always love readin ur work. very well written and structured. keep em coming xx
End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-30
When something like this comes right from the bottom of heart, it really doesnt matter if it rhymes or not...and what you wrote here is felt by my soul...great write
all the best and take care
shadowlight ( C )
at 2006-09-30
This peice is fantastic, truely the content is well presented and everything so powerfully conveyed.
not much I can really say about it but brilliant...
Bridgette ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-30
I love this poem. It was very beautifully written and it is very deep. Great job on this. I can definitely relate to this. Keep it up! 5/5
Natalie ღ ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-30
Oh my. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like this piece. You chose amazing wording to give the poem that extra effect. The emotions were very heartfelt and warming and flowed beautiful together. Very nicely done! Keep it up! 5/5
Natalie``
© FadedIntensity ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-01
This is beautiful. I could really feel the emotions that you expressed. You write so beautifully. The words you use arm like nothing I've seen before. This is what I wish I could have told someone before it was too late... Thanks for the comments on my work and taking your time to read them.
xDanikax
Take Care
xxoxoxx
Illuminati ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-01
Beautifully penned dear friend! It was a joy to read it
donaldrminikus ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-01
You know what? I think you have a magic pen. No wait I take that back.....I think you're magic. perfectly written again as always.
Don
spl1nml
at 2006-10-04
Truely beautiful, great imagry, i could almost smell the roses from my laptop screen! 5/5 x
Yu Chung Lee ( C )
at 2006-10-04
If Love is like Roses,then what about its thorns..I really like that line. It has a nice ring to it and its very creative.
InDiA izZ Ju$$ 2 Go0D 2 B3 Tru3 ( F P C )
at 2006-10-04
5/5!! Wow this poem is s0o0 BEAUTIFUL..well plz Rate n COmment some of my poems as well ;)
UnToLd TrUtH ( F C D )
at 2006-10-08
Wow this is great. 5/5
Shattered Heart♥ ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-08
Aww wow i really like tihs poem a lot. very deep and beautiful. you did a wonderful job on it. very well written poem. keep it up! 5/5
~Kristina
FlirtingWithDeath ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-18
I find this poem very soothing for the soul. Wonderful job hun 5/5
Letty.... ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-05
Awwww!!!!!!!!!! This was so beautiful! you really have a way with words. I felt all the deep and strong love and desire that you put into this poem. It really is a magnificent work of art. The flow was wondrful and the words had me feeling like I was in a whirlwind. This poem captured me from the beginning to the end and then it had me wanting so much more. you have done it again my friend, you are just simply amazing. 5/5 Keep writing these beautiful, talented pieces of romance.
Best wishes
Letty
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