Vonnie McHugh ( F P C )
at 2006-10-04
Such lovely words than you
Luna ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-04
Beautiful. Nice imagery, cadence and wording. I believe this is the first I have read of yours that didn't have a specific rhyme scheme. I liked it a lot, but specifically these lines:
Though we can imagine, we may meet again
It is improbable just as fate brought us
Together, it has taken us away...
Overall a very superb piece of work. I look forward to the next one you do. :)
Kind Regards,
Luna
Kim
at 2006-10-04
Can I just tell you, you are one of my favs on here. I love your words and how you express you feelings. I'm just a beginner but hats off to you.
misstress ( F C D )
at 2006-10-04
Very well written, I like how a Rose become a symbol of a soul/life, and by kissing its kinda a touch of gentleness/tenderness that warmth anybodys heart.
Lovely write.
God Bless!
© FadedIntensity ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-05
Um.. didn't see this one. My favs mustn't have been working. Very gentle and slender piece. I agree with Paul, very heartfelt. This seem to just glid, I like it a lot.
xDanikax
xxoxoxx
stormy ( F C D )
at 2006-10-05
A touching write...beautifully sad.
You're a tender, golden soul and I wish you the best in all you do and dream for.
Peace and Love,
Terry
Mr_blueknight"Gene Ross I. ( F C D )
at 2006-10-06
Very wild imagination and great subject also and great message are you trying to put across I love the symbolic and the flow of the story of the poem very nice penned and beautifully created Great job
Geneross
donaldrminikus ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-06
True love eternal . Thats love.
Warm.
Don
Robert Spence ( F )
at 2006-10-06
I loved the overall flow of the poem, great read indeed. Robert.
BlueMoon
at 2006-10-10
I love this !
Jasmine Gonzalez
at 2006-10-10
LOVE IT (I AM A SUCKER FOR POEMS THAT INVOLVE THE WORD ROSE)
InDiA izZ Ju$$ 2 Go0D 2 B3 Tru3 ( F P C )
at 2006-10-11
5/5!!! @WWWW this poem is VERY TOUCHING to the HEART...so0o BEAUTIFUL..brings joyful Tears 2 ma eyes!! plz Rate n Comment some of ma poems as well ;)
RainbowSlider ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-15
I love reading your poetry.
FlirtingWithDeath ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-18
BEAUTIFUL WRITING!!! You are very talented, you were so detailed and made the poem flow. Wonderful job 5/5
Letty.... ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-05
Awww!!!!! This poem is extremely beautiful! I loved the beautiful picture of romance you have painted here, The love in this poem is so strong that it pulled me all the way in and knocked me off of my feet. I love this stanza:
So my darlings take this gentle rose
Press it to your lips and caress it
As You caressed me, so I can see and remember.
This stanza made my heart skip beats. The words are so innocent, but yet they are very powerful words. The flow of this poem was just amazing. i actually got butterflies from reading this poem. lol. I think this is one of your greatest poems. You have excellent talent. Keep up the great work! 5/5 I wish that I could give you a higher vote for this one, but I can't,
Best wishes
Letty
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