Anonymous ( C )
at 2006-11-14
This poem is full of even more AMAZING! I like how you resolved it in the end, and found it a little funny, actually. It flowed very well. I think you deserve another 5. ;]
AntiSocial16 ( F P C )
at 2006-11-14
Empowering and beautiful-5/5
ily ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-16
Okay, I can totally relate.
-Wipes Eyes.- Lol, yes it made me cry. eek.
Anyway.
This poem rocked. The first stanza was perfect. :]
And it just got better from there, hun.
THe emotion was great, the flow was perfect, along with the rhyming. Didn't seem forced or anything.
Great Job. 5/5.
SouthernღCharm ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-16
That's right girl. Any guy that cheats is NEVER good enough. If he's going to break your heart, and lie to your face then he deserves in hell. Cheating is the lowest of the low. Keep your head up girl. Great poem too. 5/5
Don't let that you-know-what get you down. Lol. Laters =>
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AlexAndra
at 2006-11-19
Wow... your poetry is amazing!! keep it up!!!
Emily Jo
at 2006-11-19
That poem was GREAT. it had so much emotion in it. i can understand what your going through...its happened to me before....they day before our 7 month anniversary....but ive realised, im better than him, and i hope you realise that too...
great poem...
love...emily-jo.
EbonyEyez
at 2006-11-19
I liked it allllllooooooottttt
superman15
at 2006-11-19
Wow this is solid.
check out my collection and let me know what u think.
racheal
at 2006-11-20
So true
Amy
at 2006-11-20
Hey,i just found out my boyf slept wid anuva gal, n he lied bout if for ages, so i can so relate to this.only difference, is i still cant let go.great poem tho,if only it were that easy!lol def 5 xx
-x-Jade-x-
at 2006-11-20
Aww i love your poem it makes so much sense xx well done =]
Cara
at 2006-11-20
Omg that poem was sooo good. and so true!
♥*I carved your name on my wri
at 2006-11-20
I can totally relate to this poem... i love it!! * favs*
asia ( C )
at 2006-11-20
5/5 i loved ur poem alot i can relate 2 this from all the relationships i've been in i hope u find someone better
latoya
at 2006-11-20
Great writing that many can relate to, i've been in similar situation, one thing i will say is that u learn how to get over it, though it may take time. your heart gets stronger and resistant to potential pain. keep up the good work girl.
Zoey
at 2006-11-20
Omg thats a really reallygood poem
trisha
at 2006-11-21
This was a very interesting poem and i liked it alot
AchliNichole
at 2006-11-21
I love your poem, it can help many girls that are going through a cheater. I believe that this poem has the potential to show every girl that she deserves someone better than a cheater!!!!!! I give it two thumbs up!!!!!!!!!!!
Beth
at 2006-11-21
Ahh. nice poem... it reminds me a bit TOO much of my EX boyfriend...
Im sure that there are tons of us out there who can relate...(me being one of them )
Well done!
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