Fsams ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-30
The word intricate in the third line is having the strongest meaning. ITs just the best word choice. u deserve a big 5/5 n a cute smile. mwah
gabriella ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-30
This was beautiful, your vocabulary is excellent, your flow was smooth and this poem was just gorgeous. ;p
you can almost hear and see your poem it is so descriptive and imaginitive.........
5/5
gabriella
Marc Ortiz ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-30
WOW pooja! You said before that you find it hard to write acrostic poems. but anyway.. this one is beautiful! Fantastic work! 5/5! keep up the good work! and congrats for this beautiful Acrostic poem :)
Lisaaaaa ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-30
I read the one you first poested yeah?
Haha well, I loved that one.
But I prefer this one because of the structure.
Both stanza'z resembled each other in structure.
Well done :]
*~* broken soul *~* ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-30
You a way with words. i love this poem and i dont know why but its beautiful. your word chioce is amazing and beyond most. great job. 5/5 for me. and thank you for the comment
Robert ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-30
This is a real nice poem the message is strong and very heart felt. The flow is good I liked your descriptions in this piece well done Plot121
BECCA lessTHANthree ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-30
This poem was written with a beautiful choice of words, the flow was nice but it sounded like an acrostic, but acrostics are hard and this is still one of the better ones i've read
deadwithoutlove keenan ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-30
Wonderful poem you did a great job does shithin varghese my love or is that the name of the person this is about?? well good job on the poem
keenan
Goran Rahim ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-30
Hey pooja jee, namaste...lol.
this is another great one by you, your poems are always so great. keep it up. a 5/5 from me as always.
Jenni Marie ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-31
Ohhh this is beautiful!
So moving and touching...
I loved the word choice you used in this, the opening was powerful with it getting better and bettter from thereon.
Imagery used was beautiful, and the flow was good throughout.
yReNeRy ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-31
Oh wow, I was shocked. Those were foreign words.. Shithin Varghese. What language is that? Interesting. I'll remember those words..
So your lover plays an instrument?
When I read this, I felt like you were comparing your love to a never-ending song.
This is lovely Pooja. You've got a nice name.
best regards,
(^^,)
yReNeRy
5/5
Go Orlando ( F C D )
at 2007-05-31
This is an interesting poem, because I must looked at the dictionary to get the whole idea... ^^
}I'm dumbass ><{
So touching... ^^
Very good poem ^^
]EDO[
SweeT14 xxxPPCxxx ( F C D )
at 2007-05-31
This poem is cute!!!
"Virtuoso,
A masterpiece,
Rapture from every cord,
Gateways to our future song,
Heartfelt moments,
Everlasting music will play,
Symphonies, this is where we belong;
Evolving love."
i liked this stanza!
keep up!
Tracy D Rollings ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-31
Excellent poem ,great flow and it was amazing loved this , first I have read like it , I guess thats why .But it was great , keep up the good work and thanks, your friend Tracy ~5/5~
xStagedperfectionx ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-31
This was so amazing, I'm speechless...
Wow...that really usually doesn't happen..
It was so amazing, I don't even have words to say how great I truly think it is. Your poetry is Amazing! Lol. That's the only word I can use. I'm so speechless, please excuse my babbling like an idiot. I'm just in complete Awe. Keep up this amazing work. You're truly gifted.
5/5
-Heather
sunsetwithyou ( P C D )
at 2007-05-31
Wow! That was really good! I love how you made comparisons to music! "Hypnotic tunes" that is my fave part of the poem. Its just something that sticks in my mind.
Great Job!
~Astryd
Tara Bo Bara ( F C )
at 2007-05-31
I like this. deffinatly a 5/5 its very deep.
:]
Victoria Rainey ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-31
I really like the vocabs so strong and emotional.. very good.. I was trying to find out what word was used for the acrostic.. but until it said it was your boyfriend's name.. its a very intersting name cause I never once heard it before .. it was really good I really liked the flow.. so keep up the good work !! 5/5
Fire lilies ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-31
Another great poem. I loved the flow and the words you used. I gave it a 5/5.
BrokenREALiTy ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-31
Big words ! And it totally works !
I`m left speechless . All I can say is that that was BEAU-Ti-FUL & I lloved it .
Absolutely NOTHiNG bad to say .
..__MiNDYY
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